The Seventh City: Part 1 - The Beginning
The Bard picked up his lute and strummed a
solemn tune, as the curious men and women
gathered around to listen to the strange old
tales of the Gods of the Ancient Cities. As he
cleared his voice, he sang, clear and strong.
“And Aneldra smiled upon her face of beauty
… and built for her the perfect
the place where restless souls would flee to,
it was the place for minds to meet; it was a
place for sorrows to melt through, it was the
heart that would be Man’s lifeblood, beat…”
The Seventh City was first conceived by Joash Chee, Terence Teh and myself when we were young enough to consider whether SCGS or MGS girls were cuter (It turns out that it was neither). We never really completed the story, but I’ll do my best to tell the tale. To me, this story is about people seeking to restore hope and to reverse unimaginable odds. The triumph of the spirit reminds me that there is much more to our life here on this worldly planet. That perhaps one day, we, too, will return to our seventh city of paradise. It’s my ultimate metaphor for living the life we want, knowing how to treat people, and my favorite – the Magic – which really represents the real magical miracles that we create in our own lives by helping and healing.
“Once upon a red star, the Goddess Aneldra
made the planet, and the living creatures of
Xeth. She loved them, and nurtured them.
Good beings, they were, and they worshipped
Her and honored Her in the
Jealous of his sister’s creations, Ankylos, Her
brother, made his own creation, and called it
Rogan, and there, a mighty race of technicians
grew and discovered Science and all its power.
And one day, when Aneldra was not looking,
Ankylos stole a peek at Xeth, and gloated at
the meaninglessness of its’ inhabitant’s lives.
He made mischief on the planet, visiting and
bringing misfortune to many, ravaging it with
occasional disasters. And when Aneldra returned,
She kept wondering why her inhabitants kept
praying diligently and fearfully to avoid calamity.
One day, Ankylos was just about to steal into
Xeth once again – but Aneldra had disguised
Herself as the planet Xeth. But it was a terrible
Fate for Her that day, as Ankylos set about playing:
and sent his own planet Rogan on a collision
course with Xeth, not knowing his Sister was
merged with the planet.
Rogan’s descent onto Xeth would have created
Complete disaster, and wiped out all civilization
on both planets. But Ankylos didn’t care about
the inhabitants – he simply wanted his way.
But little did he know, he was about to destroy
His very own Sister.
Aneldra cried out in horror. Why would he do
such a thing? It was almost too late. The
planets were just moments away from complete
destruction. And Ankylos realized the folly of
his moment. Rogan came funneling down, and
its gravity pulled – no, ripped – the surface of
Xeth piece by piece, slowly crumbling itself.
Rogan touched Xeth, and all hell broke loose on
the surfaces of both planets. Aneldra’s dilemma
came in the choice she had to make – to destroy
the menacing planet that was threatening hers?
In sheer desperation, Aneldra harnessed her godly
powers and shielded the ones She loved on Xeth
and granted all power to them for protection.
She called upon a great ritual that turned her into
the very spirit of the rivers, mountains and oceans,
granting power to her devotees, who would then
take this power and protect and shield Xeth. For
she loved the world so much, she would lose her
Self and live in her creations.
And before Ankylos could do anything, Aneldra
was gone. But her sacrifice had led to the emergence
of a planet of planets. A curious oddity, Aneldra
was a wobbling pear-shaped planet, floating in
space, the final result of the Goddess’s love for
life, peace and harmony.
And Ankylos banished himself to weep for a
hundred centuries.”

1 Comments:
In anticipation of the next episode:-
Aneldra herself is a representation of all that is good.
When Aneldra passes on her powers to her worldly inhabitants, they gain the trait of immortality.
The race of beings have varying gifts, and those with the strongest are sent to the various temples for training to be psychic protectors - who then use this strength to hold the two planets together and prevent the gravitational pull of the planets from crushing each other to oblivion.
But with the advent of the new scientific race, the Roguns arise. There are two groups of Roguns - the surface dwellers and those who inhabit the underground. Surface dwellers are strong technologically and bring to Xeth (now known as Aneldra to honor their goddess) the gift of science.
Unknown to the Xethians, the Roguns underwent mind-shattering genetic mutations that sent half their population underground, fearing the light and the air that contains Aneldra's presence. Somehow, the reaction to the atmosphere crushes them, and puts them in perpetual pain, but grants them extremely twisted powers. The Roguns want to hide this embarrassing menace by finding their brethren and curing - or killing - them.
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